Very interesting- I think you should have kept it at a higher octave, mainly because at present it sounds more like your over yelling it-
I think for me, the thing that saved it from a 7 or an 8 and gave you a 9 was that you included the voice effects that really did the song justice. It was the little stuff like that. So honestly, I really liked it, I'd just have chosen a different octave to play with.
Longer than need be- but still humorous-
I listened to the full thing just for you lol-
When it came to story, there isn't much you could do with it to make it work better with itself- mainly because when it comes to puns, it's terribly hard to get a long story without having it drag on. In this regard, as a positive- I'd have to say the entire skit reminded me of Monty Python- which was awesome.
When it came to range- I would have liked to hear a bit more than an accent separating the two voices, but with what separation there was- you could at least tell the difference.
Other than that, the only productive criticism I can really give is that I thought the shop keeper was way to quiet during some scenes- just along with the customer, causeing some difficulties in believing what was happening.
And when it all comes down to naught- you still get a 9/10 for it- because it was pretty good.
Monty python? That is indeed awesome since they are my life long heroes. The main joke was that it did drag on, and the man was starting to feel on the edge. I didn't try very hard on the range, which is why I had this sitting in my computer for so long. I realized they sounded different ENOUGH so I went ahead and posted it. This is a quiet skit because I did some equalizing, but all you have to do is turn up the speakers haha.
Awesome- like always lol.
Awesome game music, but I would expect nothing less lol.
I actually wanted to make sure that you got this (I'm going to pm you about it anyway lol)
That would be the Life Goes By that I added lyrics to. Let me know what you think, and we could probably collab. Ciao!
I really enjoyed this-
It was very peaceful, and serene- And I actually have lyrics that I think would work amazingly well with this piece. I'm going to experiment with those myself for the fun of it- and if you don't mind I'd like to put it up when I'm finished, but that's up to you. Good work none the less. :)
Thank you for the nice review. :) I don't mind if you put up your work you make with my song. :P
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