Loved the dad and me entrance-
That and the "you've taken it too far" made me giggle.
Let me start by saying that as a flash :Animation:- the :Animation: itself was well rounded. You can tell that you had at least taken some time into putting the piece together. Sure the humor itself may not hold the widest viewer range- but then again, nothing fully captivates everyone. Your running at a rating of about 2.5, so obviously either half of the people liked it- or out of a thousand votes everyone agreed it was just about average.
The voicing was done reasonably well- The only one I wasn't a huge fan of was Zeus, but thats because it was "pun" time- and it really didn't matter how realistic it was.
Other than that I'm giving you the 5/10, and 3/5- mainly for the technical aspects of the flash, not the humor.
Good luck in the future,
~The :Grim: Loki
Thank you. This people *THIS is an actual review. Heil.
I've been keeping up with this for a while now- and you've yet to fail me! Awesomeness- simply awesomeness.
Aw thanks - don't worry I will work on failing you someday!
Very nice- Once again-
Like I said in episode 1, I'd be anxiously waiting for the next, so here I am.
Being a ep. 1.5 I wasn't looking for so much a story line as I was a comical filler episode, and you did it well lol. Where it doesn't have the cutting anger (with the exception of the door scene) that Larry often has- I think you definitely have an advantage of some other animators sheerly due to the fact that your willing to push topics to an area deemed unacceptable by society, yet in such a matter that it comes across as hilarious.
As I've said before, great job, and I'll be anxiously awaiting ep. 2!
thank you very much! great review.
Absolutely Fuckin Hilarious-
Literally one of those moments where you can't fuckin look away whilst saying, what.. the fuck.. is.. going on here... lawlz. Just the type of video to send to your friends XD.
Totally gonna be waiting on more from you- that was great lol.
Amazing series, even if it was "Experimental" lol.
Firstly, I was a HUGE fan of the TMoT series, lol.
Loving parts 1-3.
Secondly, because I am a big fan of the work your putting out, I had figured I might as well throw you a pm. I love doing voice acting. I'm a 19 year old male going to school for performing arts, but voice inflection is my specialty. I figured while I'm still getting the ropes of animation, I might as well try to contribute to some artists something I'm good at lol. I can do all types of voices- but I'm also good at improvising out of what other people need me to do ( Thus is why I was the craziest willy wonka this side of pennsylvania lol).
So, in short, if you find yourself in need of an extra voice, hit me up.
Its so rare that you find a brand new series that you just can't wait for the rest. I'm just amazed with this. Keep it up, I'll be watching.
thanks man. a very comforting to hear :D
There are many different types of animations out there. Some are out there sheerly for story line, and some are out there simply for cutting edge violence. It's only a select few that actually catch my interest for artistic appeal. When I watched this video I accepted it as nothing more then a demonstration of what you could do with your animation style. I am very impressed and I think you could do wonders with this. I'm writing this and just realized that you submitted this about four years ago, so I'm going to go check your newer work. Best of luck.
Good- but as with everything, can improve.
First off- I'm a big fan of the atmosphere you deliver with your animations, with all the silly overtones.
Second off, I thought that although the topic material was good, it needed a little more variety (Meaning to me it was either mario running or someone getting jumped on).
Other than that it was mainly, as Sunrie stated, a matter of polishing it off. Good video, I'll be keeping up with your animations.
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